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[SC01: Make Hole On Wall]

Good

It made me laugh, I can see your a beginner so I'm not going to bash you n.n as TheDoctorMouse said, you do need to work on your audio, maybe edit it some, take out background noise, and dont speak so close to the mic

KillProduction responds:

I did edit a little bit but I don't know how to remove the noises. And maybe I do speak too close to the mic. I try to make it better.

Edit: And I'm maybe a beginner. I am using that for a year now and now I started to make a testing cartoon animating.